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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

“Stability / Enfolded” stayed with me the longest.

I like how the language quietly mirrors the structure of the tulip itself — layered, folded, gathered into form — almost like the flower is being read as something constructed rather than merely decorative.

The poem feels less like description and more like a small observational sketch beside the watercolor, which gives it a delicate presence.

Elizabeth's avatar

Thank you. When I read your words, I feel seen in my experience with this watercolor tulip.

Marilena Aquino de Muro's avatar

Tulips are gorgeous flowers, unassuming yet multilayered. This one, the watercolour painting, is so beautiful, like your poem, Elizabeth.

Elizabeth's avatar

Thank you, Marilena.